Great... but
Ok. you had some great stuff, and some not so great stuff... Your 'photography'or camera angles were all very good. The graphics vere very well done. :) nice work on the characters, the contrast etc...
VOICES.. hm its not your voice. its your microphone technique and your microphone itself. You had so many POPPING Ps. that when air hits the mike. You need to position it so that its not too close to your mouth. Also. you need to shell out at LEAST 50 bux (american) for a half ass mike. Anybody that ever want to use decent voices should own a dynamic directional mike!
what would have improved it, (given the bad sound qual) would have been captions.
Hm thats about all for now. Oh. and a Preloader is a MUST! a MUST!!!